Analysis and Application of Findings
From my teacher, I was able to find out what needed improvement in my idents. Here is the feedback gathered:
IDENT 1:
Improvements to be made?
- Get rid of the random screenshot on the roof in the beginning of the ident
- Add in a voiceover and logo
- Get rid of the stairs transition
- Just do normal cuts instead of big transitions
IDENT 2:
Improvements to be made?
- Fix the awkward music cut-off
- Why do the scenes go from dark to light - doesn't flow
- Need to see the CBBC logo altogether at the end
- Needs a voiceover
Reading over these useful improvements suggested, I shall carry out as told from my teacher, and improve my ident.
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